Sue Vincent has chosen yet another gorgeous photo for her #writephoto prompt this week, and here is my response:
The Third Time We Choose
She was scared.
Terrified, if she was being honest. But she’d known she couldn’t take another minute stuck in that place. It had felt so good walking into her manager’s office, seeing the surprise on his sweaty hated face when she’d told him she was leaving.
Good luck to him. Or not. She really hadn’t cared at the time, the bubble of euphoria in her chest lasting until she’d got home and put the key in the door and remembered ‘he’ was there. No doubt half asleep on the sofa as usual, half-empty beer cradled in his slack hands. He’d been handsome, once, she remembered. Taking her breath away. But now all he took was what was left of her spirit.
Enough.
Before she’d been able think about it, before he’d heard her at the door, she’d pulled the key out and turned back to the car. Getting in, she’d put it into gear and driven off, not looking back. Again with that bubble in her chest, like champagne bursts of potential, of what could be.
But once again it had dissipated and now here she was, driving along a country lane going who knows where. She should just pull over, she thought. Take a moment to figure out what she was going to do. Maybe even turn around and go home. After all, it wasn’t so bad, was it?
She started to slow the car, the bubble in her chest replaced by the leaden grey of reality. Then, as the road ahead of her curved, golden light, like champagne, like flames, like the promise of a life yet to live, shone through the tunnel of trees, a beacon leading her on.
It felt like freedom. Speeding up again, she drove towards the light, making her choice for the third time.
For herself.
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love it Helen, like a drowning only coming up for the third time and breathe!
Thanks, Geoffle! That’s what I was going for… 🙂
Three is the charm. Brilliant, Helen.
Thanks, Sue 🙂
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This was really good.
Thanks, Craig 🙂
This was wonderful Helen. Simply sublime.
Thanks so much, Vinnie – really pleased you enjoyed it 🙂
I genuinely loved what you wrote.
Thanks *blushing*
I’m just telling the truth. If you ever need a movie or television recommendation, my blog has many.
Thanks 🙂 I remember reading a few on your blog before – I’ll have to head on over and see what’s new.
Well some of the content is a bit naughty.
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If you don’t mind a bit of sexy, you’ll enjoy it.
Here’s an idea of the naughtiness you may see. https://vinnieh.wordpress.com/2016/03/01/a-collection-of-butts/
Lovely, Helen!
Thanks, Ali 🙂 Did you have your exams yet? Hope they went well xx
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Your story is very well written. I like how you examined the doubt that goes into making life changing decisions.
Thanks so much, Bernadette – I’m so pleased you enjoyed it 🙂
Love it, Helen! I feel I can breathe along with her. 😚
Thanks, Janice! I’m glad she got away, in the end 🙂
Me too! 😆
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Way to go, having been there, done that, and making the third choice for Me! Never wanted to go back either. Good for her.
That’s so wonderful 🙂 I’m really pleased the story resonated with you. And yes, I was happy when she kept driving at the end!
This piece is very well written and enjoyable. I felt really pleased when she decided to drive on…
Thanks so much – so pleased you enjoyed the story 🙂
Lovely Helen. We’ve all had that feeling of terror after a huge change in our lives – but that doesn’t mean we’re doing the wrong thing. That light’s telling her all she needs to know. Brilliantly done
Thanks so much, Lynn 🙂
My absolute pleasure 🙂
Love it! Good for her for taking her life back!
Thank you 🙂 I rather liked her too, actually. It’s nice when fun characters visit.
That’s always a good time. I was almost hollering “No! Don’t go back!” when she slowed the car. I’m so glad she sallied forth!
Oh, I love that you got so involved in her story! Thanks so much 🙂 I’m glad she kept driving too.
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Beautiful – so glad she came upon the golden light that rekindled that feeling of having a purpose in going forward.
Thanks so much, Pamela – really glad you liked the story. I was happy at the end too 🙂